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Valentine s per verse by ~groovus:icongroovus:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed




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Valentine per verse

Oh clitoral sentinel
to these gates of heaven.
Essentially hollow, down, inbetween.
You thing that come.
Yeah, it will be done.
Bringing the earth to heaven
give us this day our daily shag.
And for given you cunning language
just give us a tongue lash back for
each tres-passion.
And let us lead this temptation
despite certain trials and other periods.
And rescue us from premature jack or \'jaculations

A man.

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©2003-2009 ~groovus
:icongroovus:

Author's Comments

Proper title: Valentine's per verse intentionally misplaced apostrophe and wordbreak. And that's all folks.

Oh wait there's something else ... The afterthrill, a world of neverending happiness

Instruction: kneel down between her legs and whisper with proper voicing (NO DON'T BEG FOOL … AND DON'T DROOL) in terms of focus and respect. And believe me it works all the time not only on Valentine's Day. Though you may have to alter things to her specific taste. Well there's a difference between variety and plagiarism. A difference between profane and praise. Praise your woman and begin somewhere in the middle ...

Oh and to the ladies, have it your way, like you oughtta! Stand firm lasses. Give in to whom or when you like and enjoy the liquid fire.

Yeah Let's go crazy. And after this do check pussy trap
Where you're supposed to click on the DA thumbnail for sounds on scene.

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:iconladynyk:
~ladynyk Feb 16, 2003, 9:38:21 PM
*laughs*

Oh gods, I Love it!

Kiss

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Nyk

Check out ~ekg His words weave the mundane into magick..
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Member of ~dark-writing

\"I Tell You: One must still have chaos in one to give birth to a dancing star!\" ~ Nietzsche
:iconnathanyel:
~nathanyel Feb 17, 2003, 3:53:12 AM
> give us this day our daily shag.

oh, this is great...+fav I wondering that it didn't raise some prude complaints
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~-henrique- Feb 17, 2003, 7:30:13 AM
if by the first line I wasn't laughing...by the end of the 4th I was balling rofl

I always wonder why they say some men "suffer" from pre-mature ejaculation--if that's suffering I wish I were in agony.

No, no, no! Men do not "suffer" from that.... women do! Laughing

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"People ask for criticism, but they only want praise." -W. Somerset Maugham
:iconalphaosiris:
`alphaosiris Feb 17, 2003, 8:12:35 AM
so funny, groov.

indeed.

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Behold, the light that travels into space.
:iconcasualtea:
`casualtea Feb 18, 2003, 4:46:15 PM
heheh WERD to the playing atop words!


(sorry it's a skimpy comment but saying anymore would be the end...)
:iconbluvirgo:
~bluvirgo Feb 20, 2003, 6:34:12 PM
lol.....

*rolling eyes in embarrassment*.....

it's good for a person to be open about sex......

this should be Austin Powers prayer.......or anthum......

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We all meet again.



:iconpetsrus:
:iconluci-fer:
~luci-fer Mar 2, 2003, 7:23:43 AM
LOL!

-Luci

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!xxxxxx May 5, 2003, 5:59:12 PM
I like it a lot.
Sex is like a magician.

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